{"id":251,"date":"2024-09-22T19:23:53","date_gmt":"2024-09-22T19:23:53","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/?p=251"},"modified":"2024-09-22T19:23:53","modified_gmt":"2024-09-22T19:23:53","slug":"japanese-influence-on-american-poetry-adelaide-crapsey","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/?p=251","title":{"rendered":"Japanese Influence on American Poetry: Adelaide Crapsey"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large\"><a href=\"https:\/\/pleiadespress.org\/books\/adelaide-crapsey-on-the-life-and-work-of-an-american-master\/\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"658\" height=\"1024\" src=\"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/crapsey-658x1024.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-252\" srcset=\"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/crapsey-658x1024.jpg 658w, https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/crapsey-193x300.jpg 193w, https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/09\/crapsey.jpg 726w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 658px) 100vw, 658px\" \/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Adelaide Crapsey<\/strong> (1878 \u2013 1914) invented a form called <em>American<\/em> <em>cinquain <\/em>based on Japanese <em>tanka. <\/em>Instead of a syllabic form (5-7-5-7-7 in the <em>tanka<\/em>) the <em>cinquain<\/em> is based on stress patterns with a 1 \u2013 2 \u2013 3 &#8211; 4 \u2013 1 stress pattern. The pattern is often iambic (two syllables, with the second syllable stressed, as in Shakespeare\u2019s sonnets). \u00a0Ms. Crapsey (I think correctly) decided that English is better suited to a stress-pattern form than a syllabic form. Here\u2019s an example:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Triad<\/strong><br>These be<br>Three silent things:<br>The falling snow&#8230; the hour<br>Before the dawn&#8230; the mouth of one<br>Just dead.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Here\u2019s the stress pattern:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">These be&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; duh DA (1)<br>Three silent things:&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; duh DA \/ duh DA (2)<br>The falling snow\u2026 the hour&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; duh DA \/ duh DA \/ duh DA (3)<br>Before the dawn\u2026 the mouth of one&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; DA duh \/ duh DA \/ duh DA \/ duh DA (4)&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br>Just dead. &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; duh DA (1)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">More <em>American cinquains <\/em>by Adelaide Crapsey<em>:<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>The Warning<\/strong><br><br>Just now,<br>Out of the strange<br>Still dusk . . . as strange, as still . . .<br>A white moth flew . . . Why am I grown<br>So cold?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>November Night<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Listen&#8230;<br>With faint dry sound,<br>Like steps of passing ghosts,<br>The leaves, frost-crisp&#8217;d, break from the trees<br>And fall.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong><u>Susanna and the Elders<\/u><\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">&#8220;Why do<br>You thus devise<br>Evil against her?&#8221; &#8220;For that<br>She is beautiful, delicate;<br>Therefore.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Addendum Regarding Ezra Pound:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ezra Pound (1885 \u2013 1972)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Pound&#8217;s definition of the image was influenced by Chinese and Japanese poetry. His definition of the image: &#8220;that which presents an intellectual and emotional complex in an instant of time.&#8221; Pound is usually credited with founding the imagist \/ modernist school of poetry and bringing Chinese and Japanese poetry to the awareness of Western poets. That\u2019s probably just because Adelaide Crapsey died young of TB.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Pound defined the tenets of Imagist poetry as:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I. Direct treatment of the &#8220;thing,&#8221; whether subjective or objective.<br>II. To use absolutely no word that does not contribute to the presentation.<br>III. As regarding rhythm: to compose in sequence of the musical phrase, not in sequence of the metronome.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Here is Ezra Pound\u2019s most influential imagist poem:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0<strong> In a Station of the Metro<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The apparition of these faces in the crowd;<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Petals on a wet, black bough.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Adelaide Crapsey (1878 \u2013 1914) invented a form called American cinquain based on Japanese tanka. Instead of a syllabic form (5-7-5-7-7 in the tanka) the cinquain is based on stress patterns with a 1 \u2013 2 \u2013 3 &#8211; 4 \u2013 1 stress pattern. The pattern is often iambic (two syllables, with the second syllable [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":252,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[154],"tags":[156,159,155,157,158,160],"class_list":["post-251","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-poetry","tag-adelaide-crapsey","tag-cinquain","tag-crapsey","tag-metrics","tag-scansion","tag-tanka"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/251","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=251"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/251\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":253,"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/251\/revisions\/253"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/media\/252"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=251"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=251"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jgourlay.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=251"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}